Very Sad...
First of all, the style you used fitted perfectly the story, i don't know why some guys say that it's emo and that, you explained that in your comments, but whatever hehehe.
The graphics had some small issues, but overall, they were great.
The story was very touching and had some interesting "twists"? :P
You are very talented, i realy would like to see more submissions from you.
cya!